Sunday, April 5, 2020

Animation Project: Treatment


Treatment: First Draft
How we Met



Ezaru is flying through the sky, crying, bound for her childhood home, she reaches her house, and flops down at the doorway sobbing.From further in the House Martha Notices the unexpected presence, and approaches, calling her daughter's name carefully.
Noticing her current state Marthe nuzzles her daughter fussing over her, and plopping down next to her, on the ledge leading into their home.
Ezaru through tears explains that she had had a fight with her best friend ace, they hadn’t fought before, definitely not this bad, After thinking Ezaru thinks she might be the one at fault and thinks she won’t be able to be friends again, not after the fight.

Martha stops her in her tracks, saying that one bad fight will not break a good friendship, despite not being fond of Ace, she has learned that their friendship, so far, has had a positive impact on her daughter, making her more independent and giving her more opportunities to learn.
Martha ushers her daughter inside and out of the cold. Martha leads Ezaru into the living room sitting her down on a couch like piece of furniture.
Martha sits down next to her. She explains friendships are not easy, she had her own share of fights and arguments with Nova when they were traveling.
Ezaru chuckles, and says she always loved hearing about her own mother's adventures.
Ezaru states that, Martha had told her about adventures when she was young, but never how they had met, 
Martha thinks for a second before responding that she hadn’t, Ezaru silently begs her to tell her, Martha looks at her daughter and smirks telling her she will on one condition, that the next day she would find and make up with her friend, that it wasn’t good to leave things too long.
Ezaru with a pouty face agrees to her demands and looks up at her mother awaiting the story of how they met.
Martha reminisces before beginning her story, of how she met her partner, Nova

FB1:
“Martha Narating”
Martha is looking through a clover patch, searching for four leaf clovers for her collection, She hears shifting behind her and turns to find another dragon, one of her species.
She asks who he is and he introduces himself as Nova, he trots over to the nearby tree jumping up to a hollow dug into its side, He continues, saying he hadn’t seen her there before.
Nova pulls out a small box from the trunk, plopping it onto the ground as he looks to Martha for her reply.
Martha turned her nose, telling him she was looking for four leaf clovers and the patches near her house did not have any, so she was looking in clover patches further from home, she wasn’t new he, just wasn’t observant.
A shout from the distance startels the two.
Nova curses saying his dad is calling before bounding away leaving Martha at the clover patch.

FB2:
Martha goes on, explaining she came back as she didn’t find any clovers the first time, Nova sneaks up behind her surprising her with a hello, She askes why he is back and Nova stutters out the excuse of forgetting something in the hollow on the tree, Martha gives him a doubtful look and he giggles


Small montage of them talking and playing
Narrated by martha explaining that they continued to meet up and talk

FB 3 
They both come to the tree for another catch up, after having been busy on both sides.
They meet under the tree and start chatting only to hear screams in the distance, they give each other a look and fly over to see what the commotion is.
Other dragons rush past as they fly towards and they stop in their tracks looking at what befalls them. Human are infesting their home, striking down dragons and destroying their homes.
The young dragons are snapped out of their shock at a human charges at them throwing a net, it catches Nova and he plummets to the ground, Martha shreeks and dives after him clawing away the net, managing to shake it off before they hit the ground, flying away as fast as they can with a firebreath to the human.
As they fly away martha shouts she needs to find her family, so that she can leave with them, they are cut off by a large dragon halting them, Nova recognizes him as his father and asks about his other family, his father doesn’t know and ushers them to leave with him, that they will find the others at a later time.
Martha protests at this, saying she needs to find them only to be cut off by Nova’s Father.
They did not have the time and it was too dangerous, He turns his head to see approaching humans, He shouts for them to move running himself while making sure they follow.
Nova’s Father sets of a large fire blast and the three fly into it, Nova’s father’s foot however is snagged by a hunter, he snapped off and turns to hold them off getting the other two to flee into another dimension.







Martha and Ezaru talking,  Ezaru being sympathetic
(then you went on your own adventure)
We had no where else to go., 
Knew they were killed by hunters, but thats just sad why im so scared that you go near the hunters, you are so much braver then i, doing more then I could have, you and that human, so make up okay, this will not be the end, your journey is just beginning. 


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